Sunday, October 31, 2010

Battery hen essay feedback...

Had a meeting with my tutor earlier to get my feedback for the first essay;
"Battery cages and furnished cages for laying hens"

They don't give you a mark as such, but he said if he did it would be high 60%.
I was a bit mneh about it but he said that good :)

He said I could have done with a greater use of peer reviewed references which aren't technically used until 3rd year but I might aswell start using them now and get used to it.
Went through a few places to find them with me aswell, so hopefully do a bit better on the next one!

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